For me this poem is hard to comment on. it tells me of whats going on. but i can't seem to find the right words to say this is good by the way. good poem

Awww, it's so sad. I luv it!

Man this is soooo cool!!

can you email me? just to say hi or watever?
my email is liven_4_love@hotmail.com thanks alot cool poems!