It was so hateful and sorrowful;you did a good job with this
There were alot of lines that a lot of people can relate to

Good job,
Laura

Very very deep...it showed alot of emotion keep up the GREAT work!

WOW, that was GREAT!!! it was short, but REALLY GOOD!!!GOOD JOB!!! :-)

WOW!!

This one i felt it was ment to get louder as u read on
~and it made feel like u r getting angry as u read on~

perfect for what u r saying

really good