Comments : A new life part 2.

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Hey. This seems like it should be in the love category.
    Anyway, great poem. Wonderfully written. I loved your choice of words. I think you should capitalize your "I's", it'll make the appearence of the poem much better. I really like topic of this poem. It flowed nicely as well and the rhyming wasn't forced at all.
    Good Job. 5/5

    Keep it up!

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    This seems as though it would fit in the love category, though I can see why you placed it here ... Anyhow. Swell poem. The flow was a bit rocky to me, but it oozed emotion, gratitude, and hope. Overall, a pleasure to read.

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Very well done in rhyming. I'm enjoy reading your peoms.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This poem is full of emotions and your word choice was great. the flow was flawless. and the imagery was fantastic. i dont really have a favorite stanza, but the ending was well put in. a great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Little long... But interesting... I give you 4/5