Hope all works out, good work xx

It will not because he wants to live to my face

Sorry i spelled a word wrong i met lie

This is a very emotional poem. it's truly what I think saved it from a little bit of grammarical issue's here and there.

I think that the structure could have been improved abit, changing it into stanza's would have helped.

I think that this is a really good...and sad poem. It's really something that you should cheerish..it's to bad something like this had to happen for you to write such a piece.

There are plenty of fish in the sea as the saying goes.