Comments : Baby i love you

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    I like this poem a lot. you have put great emotion in it that's real and deep. your words are simple but they speak volumes.
    i liked this stanza especially:

    "the innocence in your eyes
    the way you move
    your a beauty to behold
    that i don't need to prove"

    a well written, heartfelt poem. great work! =]
    Never be afraid to tell someone you love them..for if you don't you'll never know what could have been.

    --Viola

    p.s. thanks for the somment on my poem! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brian n Josh

    Hey, i really liked this poem, its been awhile since i've hit up poetry and this was a nice welcome back to the world. Thanks! -Brian