WOW!!

I really liked this one. I agree think i liked it the best so far too. i love your choice of wording. Very deep and emotional

I like this poem as well. So much emotion in your words. Your really swell..and have an act for writing. keep up it hun.
Jadee. :)

Wow.
love your word choice
your poems are really goood
much emotion and deep

=]louii xx

Amazing. Really you are right I like your poems. So deep, meaningful and emotional. It all comes inside of you and making every word really step up. Great work! 5/5

I don't like rhyming it looks little forced, but I like this poem a lot. You created powerful atmosphere with just a few words and expressed emotions greatly. Well done!

Hey good poem
ill rate it and others 4 u

Gets straight to the point, 5/5. Em x