I don't know what to say except that I love this poem! :D 5/5 *adds to favs*

Good poem. Most of it was excellent but not the last stanza. It seems a bit rushed. The structure was jumbled because you added one extra line to that stanza which messed up the flow.
But overall this was a good poem and I liked your choice of words. I can relate to parts of it as well.
4/5

-Shannon <3

I loved this poem.
Your young and you already have so much talent.. when i was your age I couldn't even fine something to rhyme with pain.. Thats the truth.
Poetry was definitely not my forte when i was your age, but your just great at it.
Good job.. =]
xoxo
--Chelsey