Gr8.. smooth and beautiful piece.. of wrk.. very well written.. full of many things.. its goes really deep.. and also shows ur confidence..in ur self.. its really gr8 keep it up

OMG I'm so honoured! Thankew so much... I didn't expect anyone to like it. I'm just an inexperienced teen... hehe.
Well, I'm glad you did.
But I'm NOT confident in myself. HAHA(:

Very well written, keep writing.