Awww, thats so well written and has such an amazing flow to it. well done xx

Too heartbreaking to even leave a comment...this is so true for many people out there I don't even have words to say except my heart goes out to them and apparently yours does too because you write of this beautifully....Wonderful :-)
Chelsey

Jeannie
What a awesome piece. Very heartbreaking. You have captured the emotions of losing someone so well.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Oh my word. Patriotic poems always get to me, and this one did none other than that...every line in this tore at me as if I was that little girl trying to find a way to be strong for a man that was so strong..great read, if I was able to vote, I would definately be nominating this !

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These war poems always get me.....can't wait to see an end to all the bloodshed and violence....well done!