Hey, good poem, well done x

The imagery in this piece stood out so much it nearly screamed. Your flow is also another thing that I really admire in all of your poems, it has such a flawless rhythm...makes it that much easier to read and to enjoy.

5.5
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This is an amazing piece of work. It flowed so smoothly, and it was so full of feeling. Goose bumps raised upon my arms as I read it. The rhythm is perfect, the words beautiful. I enjoyed reading this.

Love this poem!! VERY WELL WRITEN! 5/5

It was good very very good i liked it

As chaos crashes down to earth
And lends its armor without words.
--Deff my favorite part! I loved this!