Beautiful poems you penned here, though simply but you expressed them well within beautiful emotions write... i know how it feel, keep your head up high, take care.

This was a beautiful poem. The words were simplistic, but there was so much power and emotion that made the poem really strong. There was also a really good flow.
Great job.
5/5.

Ok...I am totally in love with this poem. Its perfect all over. Beautifully written and I liked the way that it flowed. I can relate to this poem 100%, I think that's why i like it so much. But yea, very good job on this one. Perfect =}
5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Wow..
I really liked this poem..
It was simply awesome and sweet...
Youh Never know when your parents will be gone but youh have to cheerish every minute of it all... =]]
Anyways...
Great Job... =]]
This is One of myy Favorites Of Yours..