Its a great start!! i like it already.

Cory

Fantastic!! It was worth the wait!!5/5 = )

Cory

Filled with love, and emotion's.
You really hit the nail there:) however, the flow is a little off, but that's easily fixed:)
I liked the message and I thought it was a good try.
Keep writting,
:D 4/5

The only thing I did not like about this poem was how you had 3 lined and 4 lined stanzas.

Other than that it was a great poem.
Good emotion, flow, and word choice.

4/5

Very nice iliked the flow and emotion =]
you should check out some of mine and please tell me what you think