Excellent poem , well written and nice flow, wonderful poem of love and very heartfelt piece , you did a great job on it and I loved the last lines the most. Great job , keep it up ,,,, Y our friend Tracy d 5/5

In one word - beautiful =)

Haha...you're making me cry...the fact that your love poems are making me cry definitely means they are perfect...keep up the good work. If I can't write them anymore I need to read wonderful ones like these...

This is sooooo beautiful!!! i love the emotion your pouring into your poems...the flow and wordage was wonderful...reminds me of my fiance'...keep it up hun, you definatly have a talent in writing! i can't wait to read more from you!

Wow.
perfect flow.
It was amazing, it had a kind of beat to it. haha.
I liked it. (:
5/5

This reminds me of my boyfriend, a poem which other people can relate to is hard to do because you hold a high responsibility, i think this was pulled offf :D a few minor flaws but still good xxx alex xxx

All to often do authors use the abab rhyme scheme, and you can see where rhymes were mushed in just to fit the form...but you certainly dont have that problem, you kept form while making the poem run smoothly, its very hard to do and you truly do have amazing talent, keep up the good work

andrew