"Let you fall so hard then lift you back up gain."
For some reasong that line didn't make sense to me.
"Your like a spreading virus,A god damn glitch."
That line right there, was AMAZING.
So much depth and heart in this poem.
The flow was rather well done,
and by the way, it isn't sucky. :]
Good work and keep it up, Roxy!

Great write!!!
Keep up the good work.

God bless u

Such an amazing poem! flowed and rhymed so well! so much feeling too! well done keep writing!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Wowawiow! :) I so loved your additude here, you made yourself looked so much bigger and stronger than the person who did that to you, and also how you used pet names. Showing your own strong character. Brilliant, you rock on, doll! :)
Also it flowed very well. Very enjoyful read. Amazing.
5/5

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....you-are-Brilliant.. an AWESOME write.. thats what..
loved what you did here ,

"..Tell me my 'love', Were you ever there?
Look sourfully into my eyes, Did you really care?
It's so sad that you left me with no other choice,
Though now that I know I have my own voice..."

"..Save you from whats right but tell you to do wrong,
Screw up your life whilst I'm humming 'our song'.
You should know by now I shall never let you be,
Remember my buttercup, Your dead to me! .."

.. Amazing talent ,an amazing write , so well painted.. dark.. indeed.

~Wake~

Wow, i love this poem, u have an awesome talent! it was so good. I love it

"Tell you your nothing,Then cut loose the chain,
Let you fall so hard then lift you back up again."
^ the ryhm chain and again does not really work unless you pronounce again like a-gane (the old english way)

but the poem expresses so much anger and pain.

i love the idea of revenge used in this poem.
you portraded it in a great way.

5/5

LOLLL maybe its because Im english then =P