That was great.
It was a sad and emotional write. The flow was flawless & the word usage was good. :)

"You know you still love her.
You try to hide it,but you do."

^^
Love those lines. Amazing job. Overall: 5.5 (:

Sorry that it's taken me so long to return the comments.
-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

I liked this a lot. Very emotional, which I always love. :] The flow was good, and the wording well done.

I enjoyed the read.

Okay. i friggin loved this. filled with so much depth and emotion throughout the whole piece. i adore that ending..such intensity that it hits the reader like a slap in the face..beautifully done.