Comments : Season Girl

  • 12 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this is simply amazing! Whole poems has mind-blowing imagery and it is excellently written from the beginning to the end. Every stanza contains great wording and outstanding atmosphere. I like all metaphors that you add in your pieces, you can make each poem truly effective.
    Well done, 5/5 from me

  • 12 years ago

    by Miu

    Wowawiwow! What are you saying about being beaten in love category like ahh this is so much better then my work. :) Imagery was just incredible and keep my mind in the poem with the pictures flashing in my head. Perfectly written, everything that should have been there was and i loved your metaphors, unique. Ahh just amazing!
    Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    The Feeling that I get here is that you are in Love with a fairy and yet....... the grounded and earthy images you have concocted make it all believeable and quite realistically touching.....
    Whatever your stated boyish proclivities may be, I perceive a deeply Sweet Heart...Strive on.....

  • I'm speechless and that doesn't happen often.
    This was just more than amazing.
    It was truly brilliant.
    I loved it.
    I'm adding you to my favorites.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lenny

    I love this, its love, its magical metaphors, its wonderful transitions between them, its beautiful....
    I could hug you happy and to a state where you would write this poem again...and it would be the best :) Not makiing sense lol