Very good job
a very nice flow...and i liked how you ended it saying the same thing you started out with only adding "is that really me?"

its a great way to end a pome
but as a suggestion
maybe add some more....feeling to it
try finding words to put into your poems that have more emotion to them
ya know what i mean

a very well written poem though
i liked it!

if you get the chance
read my new poem
Imaginary Light
thanks!

~Shannon~

I really liked this one, it's actually almost exactly what I used to think. Keep writing.

:)