That actually isnt that dirty, it very poetic, i mean there are some bits in there that arent so romantic or anything but the way you have written it is very i duno, something. :)

Wow...lmfao...verry nice=)

Hi.dats good make another i liked it.

Part 2 is good =]

I WANT PART TOO NICE... here i go to read it
-Marina

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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