This poem is deep great job 5/5* keep up the good work

Sad poem. has that really happen to you? poor you. I could never go trough that. it must have been terrible.

Wow this poem was really really vivid. i could really picture you there in the moment. its a beautiful poem and you wrote it so great. its sad but im glad you could learn from it. my favorite part....

i hate the yelling i scream myself to sleep to drown out the noise that creep.

love that part. lol good job mandy, 5/5

Hey yea through out the whole story i pictured it it was a really great but sad story
blake =]

will you read my poems and tell me what you think?

Wow...sry if this really happened to you. the words paint a very detailed picture. good job writing, but sry if it was from a real life experince.

Wooah.....
if this is true im sorry bout that experience but be strong and carry on wit life i like the poem though its really deep in emotions5/5

I really like this
it has so much emotion and you werent afraid to tell how you felt

that is very brave
i spend all my life hiding from the world and you just put yourself out there for everyone to see
it is truly inspiring

thankyou