This is so sad, and I love it because I can relate. I'm sorry if you had to go through something like this, because I've been there. Great job.

Good job..really good work you showed alot of emotion in this one...and he is missing out completely

I absolutely loved it. And I have gone through a similar situation. I hope if you HAVE gone through this, that your father knows how much he is missing out on.
:DD

This is a great expression of your feelings, I am sorry that your father is not around to experience your life with you. May your heart once again be filled with peace and joy.

sadaddy

This is a beautiful poem. it is so sad that fathers could ever leave their babies. it makes me realize how fortunate i am to have a daddy who loves me and whose strong arms i can cry in

Great job! Keep it up:)