It flows very nicely, sounds like it isnt being forced in anyway. I really like it, keep writing! :)

Wow! Excellent job you have done on writing this poem. It had an amazing flow to it and I really love the way you wrote it and what it was about. It's a very original poem. The rhyming was really good, too! 5/5

~Kristina

This is an amazing poem. it is extreamely well written. the flow was wonderful and the rhyming was perfect. It is absolutley wonderfully written. 5/5

Kalee

Omg that was great you rock!!!!!= )

Cory

Mm. I really like this piece! The bit about fingers on water was precious. I think this poem has a good depth to it, simple but beautiful imagery, and is cleverly written. 5/5 in my book!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N