"Listen to people who speak; Speak to people who listen. These things you have wont always glisten"

I really liked this, the messages within the words were spot on.
A bit of advice would be to spilt it up into stanza's so it's a little easier to read
For example like this;

"Listen to people who speak;
Speak to people who listen.
These things you have
Wont always glisten"

But excellent poem!
5/5
*Gem*

Wow increadible piece . it had alot more to it that met the eye.Great job.5/5

Cory

I love the lines "Listen to people who speak, Speak to people who listen" i lovethat! great job and this poem is awesome! 5/5

I like it lol--by the way thanks for your comments....!!

So true
so good (Y)
your work it nice as

xo.louiii

So true
so good (Y)
your work it nice as

xo.louiii