Nice poem i enjoyed it

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I do like this poem, alot. like your choice of words. but the rhyming was way off. like you'd get into it and i'd start to get into this flow, then it would just stop and i'd read, then you got into it again. but besides that this was a really great poem. check some of mine out and let me know what you think. Thanks and yours is a 4.5/5

Wow... truly touching, every stanza is greatly written, filled with real and excellently expressed emotions. I like your descriptions in this piece very much. Another one deep, honest poem from you that is really able to touch me.
The ending stanza is excellent, it adds great effect to the whole piece.