Wow, i can really relate to this poem, great job!

This poems great too !
and you say your first one was better, it must be WOAH ! lol
and the exact same thing happened to me
but i was home and i wrote this poem i really liked but then my net disconnected.
wasnt happy. lol
i wrote it again but i thought my first one was better. lol
cause the 2nd time i wrote it the moment was gone =[ ok now im just rambling on
your poems are exellent ! i love reading them

xo.louii