I like it a lot, whole poem is greatly written, except the fact that you added the dates in the piece which didn't leave very good impression for me. Anyway, poem is very touching, filled with emotions. You did great job with rhyming, too, and the flow of the whole piece is excellent. Choice of words is also great in whole poem.
Great job, 5/5 from me

I don't like first two stanzas but rest of this poem is great. You expressed strong emotions superbly and topic is very sad. I enjoyed in it, you just described every feeling excellently. Well done, this piece truly deserves 5/5(but maybe you should change first two stanzas they aren't good like the rest of this poem)

RIP Michael

Laura, this write is simply beautiful, heartfelt and filled with the love you have for Michael.... it brought tears to my eyes, I know this was hard for you to write, but I do hope it has helped you, even in a small way, to heal a little more. Keep his memories close in your heart, celebrate his life and know he is always hovering by your side keeping watch over you.... hugs and love to ya.