I like this poem a lot.
Because its my belief also.
I kinda just gave up..and let reality take over.
Good work.
Keep it up budday
Jadee.:)

I think it's good. Reminds me of some of my past work. The last stanza seemed a little off for the rhyming since it doesn't technically rhyme but other than that it's fine. I'll give it a four.

I actually really like this a lot, cause I dont' believe in god either. This poem was really good and I liked the rhyming. Nicely done! 5/5

~Kristina

The rhyme scheme was alittle off in the last stanza, but besides that the flow was perfect. I reall enjoyed the concept and your point of view. Great read/write. 5/5

marcella

The rhyme scheme was a little
off in the last stanza, but it is still
a slant rhyme! (I love those.) The
reason it stands out is simply because
the other ones weren't, making something
seem off. Otherwise, well written concept.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Incredible and very true poem. It has excellent atmosphere and you expressed your emotions greatly. Well done!

I like this...i believe the same as well.
the words and flow were great. keep it up.