Very very good! Loved this! Good topic (somthing most ppl can relate to) a very touching and inspireing poem! It ended beautifuly left us wanting more! Very good choice of words: all in all its showing alot of talent 5/5

The stanza..Our rose tinted glasses now tainted with black,
To push ourselves foward; to never look back,
Is a deep thought one can take days to think on. your vary good. 5/5