Comments : A war she can't win

  • 14 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is a really good poem. i liked it a lot. you did a good job on writing it. keep it up 5/5


  • 14 years ago

    by Ken

    I like this poem alot really good job 10/10* keep up the good work cant wait 2 read more

  • 14 years ago

    by Cayy

    This is great, did you write it yourself?
    you should write more =]

  • 14 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    I loved the whole entire poem, it flowed nicely and just had a lot of relatable emotion in it...I do suggest though, seperating your lines so its easier on the eyes...but amazing poem!