I liked the poem. I think it was penned pretty good. Although you could still improve, by working on the flow a bit, and maybe use more descriptive words.
But other than that it was good:)

4/5
-- Elly.

Grat poem!!

"bottles on my left," << bottle's because it is saying 'the bottle IS on my left'

The I's.

Other than that it's a great poem. I really really like it.
You have talent, though I think you need to work a little on the poems, they all have GREAT&&AMAZING potential.
(:

Keep it up dear.
4/5