Comments : Lupine Moon

  • 16 years ago

    by Emi

    You wrote the greatest poem ever. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Howhowhowoooooooo, What a magnificent write
    Heart stopping howl splits the air
    senses heightened, steady stare
    glowing eyes transfix your prey
    Stunning beast so fierce and fey

    This stanza stood out for me ,but then I really enjoyed them all. Great poem!
    About turned this coyote into a wolf, Ha,Ha!
    Peace and Blessings

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    This flows excellent!! Your writing is powerful.. and I love it!! Amazing work!

    5.5**
    <33

    And thank you for your comment =)

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Awesome....beautifully descriptive and haunting....love the rhyme and flow.....from beginning to end....perfect!

  • 16 years ago

    by BittersweetDecay

    As I said at the end of my contest, GREAT poem. I loved the flow and the vocabulary ^^