Nice poem! easy to read and i love the way you begin and end it with a question. lovely peice.

I concur very great. i liked the"Reality is a harsh friend,
Truth revealed in pain,
Pain melting into anger,
Spewing poison through the mind,
Convincing you love is not real." part.A great emotional concoction.5/5= )

Cory

Very deep and emotional piece, it has some very original and truly superb lines. You created great and touching atmosphere. Well done, it deserves 5/5