Comments : Through the eyes of a child

  • 13 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    An idealised vision into something that happens so frequently, and yet never a truer word spoken. Well done, on a portrayal of something that is, unfortunately, so common. xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    This is very emotional and sends out a powerful message.... beautifully written and touches the heart. Its a shame how true this is for so many out there! Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a truely wonderful piece you have written. The sadness is overwhelming.

    Free as the bird that flew overhead,
    Free as the sea, so wild,
    If only they could stop for a while,
    And see through the eyes of their child.

    This stanza really touched my heart.
    Excellent job!
    Take care Cindy