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by C Cattaway
An idealised vision into something that happens so frequently, and yet never a truer word spoken. Well done, on a portrayal of something that is, unfortunately, so common. xx
This is very emotional and sends out a powerful message.... beautifully written and touches the heart. Its a shame how true this is for so many out there! Well done.
What a truely wonderful piece you have written. The sadness is overwhelming.
Free as the bird that flew overhead,
Free as the sea, so wild,
If only they could stop for a while,
And see through the eyes of their child.
This stanza really touched my heart.
Take care Cindy