Comments : Simple Thoughts from a Simple Girl

  • 16 years ago

    by kIROS DELA VEGA

    I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

  • 16 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    And the rest of the world wants to hear your story :]
    Your writing is amazing, it blew me away.

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    Oh wow.
    this is really good.
    and so true !

    "I don't think God gave us a rose with a thorn to show us that not everything is perfect,
    But rather,
    He gave us a thorn with a rose,
    To show that if you look through the pain of the thorn,"

    i loved that part of the stanza and how you wrote it.

    i liked how every stanza kinda linked onto the next one really really well.
    it was super good !
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Pretty good one. Like it!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    It was long but it did not bore me so that means it was AWSOME!hehe really nice job!