Loved it from the start, I can relate to the first 2 lines, I feel like some people in my life treat me this way, though I know yours is coming from a different experience. Nice job.

=( This is a sad poem but no one could have ever wrote it better.

I love this poem it explains your feeling so well

Awww so sad ... but its awesome as =]

xo.louii

So good! AWw flowed really nice. And i liked how you let that ending open for readers think what happens to that person. Aww also a really strong emotion to it. Amazing write.
5/5 Keep it up!

Such an amazing poem. Really sad. But thats the things you write about..And sad poems mean a lot with such emotion. Keep it up budday
5/5
Jadee. :)

Your poems always have soo much emotion in them. great write. keep it up!

.:katelyn:.

Great work. I really liked the "let loose" aspect of it. thanks for the comment on mine.

Cheers,
G/A

Great poem....very sad but very well written...great job
~*~Cindy~*~

Great poem. well written.

-thatz for the comment. :]]

<3 5/5.

I absoultly love this! the emotions were soooo powerful && so sad! keep it up hun, i love your writting your very talented.

Jenna

O_______O aww!!
-huggles- don't be sad!
that was very powerful dude!!

Wonderful, again...the emotions are pouring...i love it! i do i do! wonderful word choice and flow. just Wonderful! keep it up hun!

Love it youre such an amazing poet keep up the great work

This explains alot about many people, 5/5. Em x