Beautiful imagery..
lots of love
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Sam
What a beautiful poem of love.

Your lips leave mine,
With a tender kiss,
But our hearts remain intertwined,
Never did I know such a love exists,

This kind of love is a real treasure.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

That was the sweetest thing i read in the whole of this day.. beautiful emotions.. amazingly expressed. . simply , great !
Beautifully done..superb work

~Wake~

I like how the tempo is in this poem
ryhme excelent! words are simple and expressive...i envy writers who can rhyme and has simple words express it....