Comments : Where is the One

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ItS lovely! indeeD a lovelY penneD 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Hmm.. isnt it painfull wen sum1 leaves u just like tht.. feel so betrayed.. very relatable to me.. my own story.. well your poem is really awesome.. the way u express is amazing.. i cn really relate it to myself.. beatifully penned downn.keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem , well written and very sad, I hate to feel that way, but to be honest I do , loved the poem was great and these lines got me,,,

    Where is the one that my heart calls out to day and night,, PLEASURE TO READ,,,Your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by RxQueen

    That was so dope thanks!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nebula

    A wonderful write Cindy, well done. I enjoyed the flow. An easy read and the emotions and pain come through nicely...
    ;)