Comments : Hanging By A Moment

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Beautiful! This piece was FULL of imagery and emotion.
    Instead she had mumbled that she had to go
    ^that line really packed a punch to me. How it hurts to not give or recieve an answer when it's asked for. Good job Gem!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    What a heartwarming poem. So sweet and sincere.
    You really get the shock across as well as the realsiation that this is no bad thing, the love comes through effortlessy in the poem.
    Wonderful, as always.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Trevor

    Awsome ! "it feels so true thats how i feel when i am with you" (meaning my true love) just added you to my favorites ! i loved it
    Thanks
    Trevor

  • 16 years ago

    by truelyonee

    Aww this is amazing =]
    i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awwww made me feel so warm inside :)
    i missed your poems :) 5/5 as always Gem :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Beatrice

    Oh I so loved this poem it was amazing...I give it a 5. Outstanding Work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this...this is breathtakingly beautiful.
    I loved how it was the girl proposing and not the guy ^^
    You did a wonderful job on this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    Nice poem i enjoyed it

    comment back :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Another excellent poem. Sounds exactly like my story except my ending isn't as perfect.
    Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    DAAM that was a great poem, but y did u call it Haning by a Moment !?
    i was gonna do 1 called that grrr
    ill just hav to make mine better =p
    .........oh brilliant job btw 5/5 =D

  • 16 years ago

    by i less then 3 you

    Omg!!it great no EXCELLENT great job dude!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kat

    "I'll be hanging by a moment 'til you give me the sign"

    I really really love this line. This whole poem is captivating. Wonderfuly written. I want that to happen to me. :) 5/5!

    ~Kat~

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    You already know that from the first time I read it. Every line in it is so well written that the reader is able to pull themselves into your words and put themselves in the situation that you wrote about. Probably my favorite from you as of yet, ;)

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    This was heartfelt and beautiful.
    I loved how the beginnnig starts out sad but then the ending is so sweet. This demonstrates that true love wins over all. An amazing piece. great work! =] keep it up.
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by Taz

    Wow this was a real stunna of a poem and i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by emilyy

    Awwww how sweet. i love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by stephanie

    Love this poem. its awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Gem i hvnt spoken to u in ages. i hope uve been good. this poem was really good there was so much emotion keep it up xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Haha. This actually made me smile. I could place myself in the situation and kind of see it in my mind. It really was a nice story. And I liked it, very much.
    Especially the rhyme and flow. This was so easy to read.

    5/5. most definately.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Etched in her mind was the memory of his face
    When she'd hurried away as if running a race
    The hurt and confusion in his eyes was so clear
    How could she have hurt someone so dear

    this was deffinatly the heart breaker right there. it was amazing and it drew me into loving this poem like no tomorow ! it was deffinatly worth the read. :-) good work dear