Comments : MAURY CAN YOU HELP A SISTER OUT?

  • 14 years ago

    by Kyle

    LMAO!!!!this poem is pretty hilarious!!! and if it offends anyone then fck em, thats what they get for whoring around. lol but i love this poem!! 5/5!! great work brooke

  • 14 years ago

    by Faten

    Hahaha lol. nice job. lol

  • 14 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    I loved it and gave it a 5/5 because it actually made me laugh out loud [I don't think my teacher was to happy about that though *wink*]

    "And after all these tests, I dont think youre the mother"

    This line was great. My only suggestion is to fix some of the spelling/grammar mistakes. Other then that, great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by damont

    I like this poem as well. the title was funny. and from then it it got even more funnier. yup yup. i feel sorry for her. but it still funny excellently written