Comments : Affinity.

  • 16 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    What a stunning and beautiful peice. I loved your vocabulary choice - soft, lulling and irresistable.
    The second stanza really stood out and the ending was so strong.
    A wonderful and memorable poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I really enjoyed the last stanza. The poem contained a nice message in it which I appreciated. 4.

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Mind provoking thoughts.

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Another beautiful Poem. You have an exceptional ability at writing Free verse Poetry. I look forward to more of your work.
    Peace and Blessings