Comments : Lament of a Dying Butterfly

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    :[ , so touching, a great poem to read. I love the over all effect that I got from this poem, I know it`s probably nto what you wanted to come out of it,...but I kind of put myself in the butterflies...wings? Lol, and just thought about how you gotta seize the day and all...anyways, a sad poem, but still so very amazing ^_^

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Such emotion and metaphors! Breathtakingly written and sad....love it!