Nice poem i enjoyed it

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Oh, how much would I love to hear someone speak words like that to me..!! What a gorgeous poem.. it's been a while since I just sat, and read.. I'm glad yours is the one I chose to do so.. Well done, as always. xx

Oh my...well slap me silly ! That was amazing, and even that strong of a word does not truly do this piece the justice it deserves. I have always tried to write using Shakespearean terms, but it always comes out sounding like pooh; you make it seem so darn easy ! You are an amazing girl with an amazing talent, this has got to be one of my favorites from you...which, as you should assume, is a lot to say !

"Come love, my love, upon this night
A chance that I should bid you well
Inside thy arms I wish to hide
Upon thy breath a whisper tell."

^^ I LOVE this stanza, I couldn`t choose which one stood out to me the most because they all did ! Just wow.. lol

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The rhyme and flow in this piece are perfect! I loved the line about lips the color of cherry wine. How beautiful. This had a reneissiance feel to it (my spelling stinks). Really enjoyed the abab rhyming too!
Amazing piece as always, but a step above the others I think!
Charisma*

This is a very well written piece! Strong emotion, wonderful use of Shakespearean terms. The flow skipped a few beats some places for me, but overall was pretty fluid. I loved the line:

"Upon thy breath a whisper tell"

Beautiful!
Nicely done,
Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

I adorrre how you've got that touch of ye' old english in this, its like....mad elegant and really refreshing to see, haha..dont come across it too much these days, great work!

Wow, this is wonderful. Usually I'm kind of like, "Meh" when it comes to old English terms. I'm a modern lass. =P But this was truly amazing. The flow was perfect, the wording was perfect.

It was a beautiful poem. :)

That was a really good poem...you have a way with words! :]

I really envy you being able to write in this style,you are so good at it,I think it is the most romantic of all among the different styles.This is really great.

I imagined those words while standing beside a love in the middle of a full moon light. Tis so romantic.

So beautifully constructed....love the style, rhyme and word usage.....absolutely beautiful love poem!