Oh, how much would I love to hear someone speak words like that to me..!! What a gorgeous poem.. it's been a while since I just sat, and read.. I'm glad yours is the one I chose to do so.. Well done, as always. xx
Oh my...well slap me silly ! That was amazing, and even that strong of a word does not truly do this piece the justice it deserves. I have always tried to write using Shakespearean terms, but it always comes out sounding like pooh; you make it seem so darn easy ! You are an amazing girl with an amazing talent, this has got to be one of my favorites from you...which, as you should assume, is a lot to say !
"Come love, my love, upon this night
A chance that I should bid you well
Inside thy arms I wish to hide
Upon thy breath a whisper tell."
^^ I LOVE this stanza, I couldn`t choose which one stood out to me the most because they all did ! Just wow.. lol
The rhyme and flow in this piece are perfect! I loved the line about lips the color of cherry wine. How beautiful. This had a reneissiance feel to it (my spelling stinks). Really enjoyed the abab rhyming too!
Amazing piece as always, but a step above the others I think!