I liked this...about your thoughts and how u really want to write something about love but there isn't any form of for you to write about...nice touch...you can write about "love" in different ways like things u enjoy doing or just a passion of yours...the tone of your poem seemed sad or like your a little depressed...but good job...hope this didn't bother u what i wrote....well, have a good day...cindy

Another well written poem. I liked it, however, I think you should break it up into stanzas, I think it'd be easier to read and would also have better structure. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

WelL saiD.....prettY gooD expressionS anD mosT thrillinG tO reaD... 5/5

Aww this one was quite sad to read, truth is I find it easier to write when I'm feeling really emotional....which can be quite a lot lol....beautiful piece Pete.

This is such a wonderful poem, even tho its quite sad, i really like it, its very powerful in some way i feel, i really like this a lot!!! beautiful!!! 5/5 i must say.

MickeysBabyGurl

Ohh I liked this one a lot!! It flowed beautifully and I felt as if you were talking to yourself and it gave me a peek into our mind. The last two lines were just powerful and an amazing way to end the poem. Well done *5/5*

And congrats, you have just made your way into my favorites with your wonderful poerty. :]

Great concept here. It's definitely a sad and depressing read and you wrote it beautifully. Yet, another wonderful write. 5/5

marcella

Pete, Saw this posted in Kevin's competition and it is absolutely beautiful.

Perfect flow and rhyme and so sadly beautiful.
It reminds me when I got riter's block for many years after an extremely painful breakup.....

"So I cannot write a poem,
About anything I love,
Because not one thing can love me back,
Now that push has come to shove. "

^ ^I love the ending verse....sums it all up so perfectly....well done, Debbie