Comments : Lies

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Wonderful! The message in this packed punch, and holds striking truth. I loved your word usage, and the flow was simply flawless! A superb write!

    "To late you start to regret"
    Is the 'to' supposed to be 'too' ..?

    Excellently penned, and emotive.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    As I knew I would be, I was not disapointed.
    This peice flowed beautifully, and you really hit the nail with truthfulness.
    I love how you explained lieing.

    A Fascinating read.
    5/5