I really liked your poem, well done 5/5

So beautifully written..
keep it up!
-Lisa

You are right, the sound of silence is so overwhelmingly beautiful!

I loved this poem, great work!

Best wishes,

5/5 Ingrid

I realy liked ur poem a lot..specialy the last stanza..brilliantlywritten n the depth in those lines..wonderful dear.

Wow! This was simply beautiful. There is nothing I would change about this poem. The flow is perfect, the concept beautiful, and the rhyming was right on time. Each word painted a stroke of the most beautiful picture I have ever seen. You are a great poet Jaime. Simply amazing. This wasn't even a sad poem, but the beauty of it brought me to tears. I loved every word of it. Magnificent!!!!

Letty

This poem is amazing!!!!
Today, great beauty was revealed,
Through a simple lack of noise.
it truly is beautiful!!!

GR8T pome *****

There is true beauty in silence. adn you found it. and you bottled it into a poem. a beautiful poem. loved it. <3

I love the way a person can discover beauty in simple things, I honestly believe that ability shows ones true character... appreciating natures free beauty and relishing the moment. And that's exactly what you've done here, the way you described grass as having an unbreakable backbone and finally unmoving to another's will was ingeniously crafted... as well as your use of imagery in describing the clouds as sitting rather heavy, vividly remarkable! I look forward to reading more of your work =)

Richard

Great flow, beautiful choice of words. I enjoyed this poem very much. 5/5

Ah yes the sounds of silence is such sweet melody... I really liked your work and the words you chose. keep up the good writes

Today, great beauty was revealed,
Through a simple lack of noise.

JUST AMAZING SO MUCH EMOTION I AM CRAZY ABOUT THIS

In silence we awake
to glimpse at the beauty.

like the poem...

Impressive...Ur poem is so nice and well-written...and its title was really fantastic..good job,keep it up5/5

This poem was really good enjoyed the read

This poem was really good enjoyed the read