Something happened when you posted it and there's a few errors:
"itâ??s because youâ??re" it has those question marks in it.. you should fix that =].

Well this poem was very beautiful and sweet, and I really liked it a lot, You wrote about something that a lot of poem can relate to. You did a very good job on this poem! 5/5

~Kristina

I like this poem because my bf is always saying "until the end of time" and this is a unique poem. i love it ! 5/5