Wow! This is a really deep poem. I like the flow of it though. Very good write. :D Cant wait to read more.

Maria

The feeling of abandonement throughout this poem is overwhelming. I think your poems are definately worthy of being on this site!
I loved this one, it reflects how I am feeling myself right now..thrown away like a worthless piece of cloth.

Take care and keep writing,

5/5 Ingrid

Another good poem, your poems are worthy to be on this site,