Nice write, although not really a rhyming poem, it was still very good and flowed well. Great work, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

Hello my friend,
i just want to say im really in love with your poems, you know how to write... great inspiration...

keep it up like always.

The structure in this piece is nice. It had a musicality to it I really liked. Raw and full
of emotion. I enjoy how you did the ending.
A unique piece, well worth another read!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

I love this one, it's so realistic, and it's really... Great.

This is a really nice poem. No one ever wants to be alone, and it is always sad when you are. Anyway this is a great poem. The wording and flow were wonderful. 5/5

Kalee