Comments : What's wrong?

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautifully well written

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    ...... i'm sorry so so sorry please forgive me i love you... until dawn and dusk collide.

    very nice poem i didn't know you felt that way.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessicca Wiemken

    Very sweet and sad poem but i like it because ive been treated the same way. it sucks i kno.