Hey, thanks for your comment. I really like this poem, very powerful Well done.

I wasn't to fond of this poem. Not so much that it lacked emotion and such. But, because the words kind of .. didn't flow well. I liked the meaning, there weren't any mistakes [[from what I seen]]. But, I think the thing that makes me not like it as much as the others is the fact that the whole 3 stanza 4 line thing. It's the same, and it doesn't fit this poem. It needs like.. more edgey look to it.
If that makes sense.

I'll give it a 4.5
It was good just not your best. :|

It was good but not your best.

This isn't one of my favorites from you, I didn't feel emotion or heart coming from it, and the flow was lacking. A good idea that I liked, just not my favorite execution of poetry.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

This is so real, it's not even funny! 5/5

Really liked this. Made me think a lot. Its just so real & amazing. but it is lacking something.