Good but i think the babe brings it down - that could be interpreted as good cause it makes it a tad more raw

Hey Babe..lol guess who...
i LOVE this poem
it's like when i read it...i can see it happening in my head...Prolly because it HAS before...lol
I LOVE YOU!!!

I love this poem!!!
i really hope that everything you say is true...
im always there for you too babe!!!